Good Storyline But.....
The Author needs to invest in a good editor who is familiar with spelling AND grammar (Sheree and I, not the other way around). There were several different characters in this story, at times both the reader and the author got a bit confused.
What does book two have in store for us, because this story ended with quite a BANG! Very good read.
I enjoyed the book. It was interesting and it is most definitely a page turner. The reason for four stars is because of the grammatical errors. Overall this is a five star book minus the grammatical errors. Can't wait to finish the series. Could've been better WARNING SPOILER ALERT
This book could've been a whole lot better if it wasn't for the grammatical errors, (which I never usually comment on, because soooo many other readers would have already done, but I couldn't just let this one slide. That's how bad it was.) And the predictable story line. SPOILER ALERT: What grown educated woman in their right mind goes to a married man's house that she is cheating with? Then says I would be passed if another woman was in my home Expect the unexpected
Wow it was a lot going on in this book, it was well written and flowed great but it was a lot of characters and they each had their own drama going on. I hope Anthony don't kill his wife but she was foul for what she did. Good read I will be reading part two. Tiffany Stephens OMG ZERO STARS!!!!
It's way to many characters to keep up with . The author constantly mixed up the characters . Even created a new character tori I was so confused throughout the book . Whatever you do DONT waste your time . This book has way to many grammar errors . Kindle Edition
Quick Read
Good little short story. Nice plot. A few errors but otherwise a good read. I would like to know what happens in the conclusion. Really good!
I couldn't put it down! It was really good, and a definite page turner. I can't wait to read more from this author! Wow
Human sometimes could make u do the worst anything that is bad always fun and sweet hmmm I fell in love this book want more Good book however
This was a definitely a page turner, however did anyone notice when the book first started off they introduce a character named Jamal who actually turned out to be Marcus. There were too many grammatical errors. The characters were mixed up and many times I had to figure out what was being said. I normally won't complain however, there were just too many errors. The author Tiffany also over did the sex scenes. After while I got bored with how perfect the sex was, and much too long, which can cause you to lose interest.
Now please don't get me wrong I enjoyed each and every moment as the plot thickened, I just think the editor should of taken a little more time to proofread this book before putting it on the market to be sold. These type of book are normally predictable, but some of this surprised me. Hopefully part 2 will be a little better. I would of gave a rate of 5 but we just have to do better editors. I am beyond tired of all these urban authors with poor editing. The storyline itself was not bad and I actually was interested in the book but with so many errors it takes away from the story. There were several instances where the character names changed and I would have to stop to reread the page only to continue and realize who they were actually talking about. How does one change the character's name out of the blue like that?? I hope in the next book the author invested in an editor. I can't say I will be reading the next book
Taylor, Nicole, and Sheree are three friends who think they have their live all figured out, but an unexpected turn of events will change their lives forever. Marriages are on the line, and the possibility of new love coming into play will alter everything that they have. Dive into this story of infidelity, secret lives, and murder. Remember to Expect the Unexpected. Expect The Unexpected
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